新冠肺炎疫情牵动着全国人民的心，各地教师为响应教育部“停课不停学”的号召纷纷开展线上教学活动。线上教学有何优缺点？你对于线上教学有什么好的建议？请根据提示写一篇英语文章谈谈你对“线上教学”的看法。
写作要点：
1. Advantages(stay away from disease/make use of time/...);
2. Disadvantages(distract(使分心) students from study/bad for eyes/...);
3. Suggestions on online study(...).
要求：
1. 短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 书写工整，尽量不要涂改，词数不少于80, 开头不计入总词数。
| Ever since the NCP began, it has stopped most people from leaving their homes, |
| especially students. |
例文
In order to let students keep studying, all teachers begin online teaching activities. It means all students study online at home by watching TV. Here are some advantages of online study. It can make them safe by staying away disease. Meanwhile, students can make use of time at home instead of talking with other students or something else that will waste their time at school. However, some games online may distract students from study. At the same time, spending a long time on the TV screen is bad for their eyes. Many parents and teachers wonder whether the students studying or not online.
In my opinion, if we can make a good plan for the online study and the parents can help check the kids’ homework and study in time, online study will be a good chance for students to develop efficient and useful learning habits. After all, students are the true masters of study.
【解析】
1.题干解读：该题属于话题写作。写作时要注意文章承接开头，内容要写齐全。
2.例文点评：例文采用二段式，第一大段陈述线上教学的优点和缺点；第二大段陈述我对线上教学的建议和看法，结构清晰，段落分明。用第一人称来进行写作分析；时态采用一般现在时为主。
3.高分亮点：
短语：In order to，keep studying，in my opinion，stay away，At the same time，be bad for。
句型：if引导的条件状语从句，whether引导宾语从句，定语从句。
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